One night Mona Lisa got her newspaper and it said something about an art class. She wanted to teach people about art and sculptures. So she went to go to her job. On her first day, she learned to make sculptures, and she met a man named Dr. Carver, and he told Mona Lisa how to make good sculptures. So she was teaching art and she was explaining stuff about ancient sculptures, and how they made them. The next day she showed everyone how to make a sculpture. She made a good sculpture and showed it to Dr. Carver. He said “That is a good sculpture.” So she practiced at home and she was getting better and better. So in art class she made a really good sculpture and showed it to Dr. Carver and he said, “Whoa! That is an excellent sculpture! I couldn’t do that good!” “Thanks,” said Mona Lisa. Dr. Carver practiced at home but still he couldn’t make a sculpture as good as Mona Lisa. This made him very angry. So in art class Mona Lisa was teaching about paintings until Dr. Carver came into her art class. He yelled “Mona Lisa! How did you make such a good sculpture?!” I practiced,” she said. “Well I practiced, but I didn’t make a good sculpture, now tell me!” “I just practiced!” said Mona Lisa. “If you don’t tell me I will lock you in the cellar forever!” Dr. Carver yelled. One of Mona Lisa’s students ran to the nearby police station and got the cops. Dr. Carver was taking Mona Lisa to the cellar when the cops came. “Dr. Carver you will go to jail for 35 years” said one of the cops. So he was arrested. Later, Mona Lisa’s students made sculptures out of rocks.The end.
By: Andrew S.
Edited by: Jeffrey, Megan, Shaya
3 comments:
Andrew great job on creating your blog. You added your story and your title :)
Don't forget you still need to add your picture, editors and who wrote the story.
I love the part where the cops catch dr.carver. And i liked the story because you used mona lisa as an artist when she was painted by an artist. The only things i would work on is to stop the run on sentences and make sure you have your apostrphe's in the right place. But overall a great story
This is a really good story Andrew.
It's funny beause if nobody knew about the Mona Lisa and someone told your story, because it's so creative and no one knew about her they could be brainwashed into thinking that your story is what she could have done.
your story is really a funny creative post.
Keep making stories Andrew. You're really good at it.
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